Barren
I listened to the other one and this is definitely a huge improvement over it. I like the idea behind everything and the song overall I just think you might want to put a bit of variation on the drums. Or (hear me out) you could add some heavy reverb on the drums to make them sound "far away." then somewhere in the middle fade the reverb out while you bring the beat to center stage. Just an idea. If you don't like that that's fine, I am craving a bit of reverb on the clap, however.
I would say to definitely vary the beat, maybe add a sample drum beat behind yours to give it some more flavor but take the volume down to like half of the drums you already have. It will just spice it up a bit. Anyhow, if when you choose to upload you're looking for a genre I'd place it in ambient.
Just a couple examples here - fool around with effects on various instruments to see if you can get some different sounds. You just need a bit more variation to keep the listener interested. I can't wait to hear the final.
~SinJim
PS - Sounds like you're in a desert (duh - the title) but maybe a humongous cave - meh *shrug*